Angel of the Black flame
this is one of my many stories i will be writing:
The Angel of the Black Flame
Prologue
This is a fascinating story about action, adventure, and some comedy in between. A story about the group FORTRIN, and their target- two bounty hunters after the man they were hired by. During this story you may laugh, you may cry, you might even jump and yell ‘‘MURASAKI SUCKS’‘, but it’s not likely. Now to let you begin your journey through a time & space into the not so distant future...
Chapter 1
The Last Hunt
‘‘Sir. I have two more bounty hunters approaching sir!’’ skull, the leader of the biggest crime ring in the world, grins evilly. ‘‘Excellent, dispatch Fortrin’’ the captain looked at skull ‘‘is that wise?’’ skull turned to the captain, ‘‘are you saying my judgment is not right, captain?’’ the captain started to shake his head. “Of course not sir, I would never...’’ skull turned back to the monitor on the outside. “ I sense that these two will be different from the rest... have your best men ready.” The captain left the room. Outside JD and X (2 of our main characters) enter the area. “I don’t think it’s smart to just walk up and ring the doorbell.” X says to his partner. JD walks up towards the door, “watch...” he knocks. “Pizza delivery!” X hits himself in the head. “I knew I should of stayed home and watched that pay-per-view.” He says to himself. To the two’s surprise someone inside yells, “hold on!” The exchange a glance “didn’t think that would actually work.’’ X stares at him. “You mean to tell me that you didn’t know if that would work or not!?” He half yelled. JD shrugged his shoulders, “nope, I thought they would rush out here and shoot us to death’’ X’s jaw dropped, “last time I go on a hunt with you.’’ the gate slowly started to open. A soldier stepped with about 3 $20’s in his hands. He looked at the two, “where’s the pizza?’’ JD looked back at X then shook his head. “Well, do you have the pizza or not?” JD turned around, swinging his fist directly at the soldier’s head. His fist connected with the jaw of the soldier. When the soldier hit the ground, another came running. “Billy?” X swung a mighty blow in the stomach of the soldier, who collapsed in a heap on the ground. “Lets take their uniforms before they get to tell their friends what happened.” X said to JD. “One step ahead of you!” JD already had one of the soldiers dragged into another room. They took their uniforms and were on their way to the high tower where skull was waiting for them.
“Hey!!”
Who are you?
“Murasaki, hurry up and put me in the story!!”
Shut up, you’re in the next chapter!
“Oh, okay, but make it snappy!!”
Stupid.... Idiot... I'm the author I'll decide when you come into the story!!
“Jease!, you don’t have to yell...people these days...”
and thats only the first chapter, if u would like to read the whole thing, EMAIL ME!! or if u would like to be in it, conntact me by my aim account ShadowBladeXI, if u dont have aim, email ur pic, and a small profile, and i would be glad to have u in, i cyrrently working on BOOKS II and III, so there are many slots open.
ps, i also have profiles of characters u will read about, if u want to see them, just ask!
~JD~
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